Friday, October 24, 2008

Fever

Friends! You all must have heard of method acting. Now let me give you another term. Well, this happened to me as something like 'method poetry'. I was actually down with fever when I grabbed this one.

Baby, I have got fever
I am still bed-ridden
Can't you see my tears
They ain't at all hidden

I can't move my hands
To give you a tender touch
I am feeling so helpless
I curse myself so much

You and only you can make me
Get off this stinky bed
Come, give me the kiss of love
From your lips divine red

It's all been said and done
We are true heaven's friends
I know what I am doing
I leave my life in your hands

Don't leave me this moment
Then I would surely die
Maybe this is the last time
So let me kiss you goodbye

PS: Please, do appreciate my effort if you enjoyed reading the post.

1 comment:

Unknown said...

your efforts are appreciable... i'll mail you my detailed comments